13th July 2011

Defiant Little Sub

Oh I’ve been a bad girl

While we’ve been apart

Now I am in a twirl

Is it too late to start?


Once that he is here with me

The music I must face

For task that I have let go free

And forgetting of my place


I wonder should I fear

The stinging of the belt

Will shedding of a tear

Ease the blows I’m dealt?


His fingers twined in my hair

His sharp teeth biting me

Suddenly I care

Mistakes I’ve made you see


Defiant little sub

Protected by an ocean

Playing him a merrier dance

But now I have a notion


Things are not going to be

Like that any more

I think I have to change my ways

Or live with being sore


Ps…The word this week from The Erotic Notebook was #once.



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Clive July 13, 2011 - 10:22 am

Brilliant – and love the image, perfect pose their Molly. No doubt you will be sore either way, of course 🙂

Pixel July 13, 2011 - 10:52 am

*grin* I like! Great imagery, although I want to know what on earth is wrong with being sore? 😛

DDD July 13, 2011 - 1:25 pm

Oh, Molly. You’ve got that bad girl pose down, girl. I think you’ve got a few stripes coming your way. And I, for one, can’t wait to see them;-)

Stranded July 13, 2011 - 5:32 pm

No more oceans to protect you…bravo. Dare I ask, is that a *gasp* cigarette? *runs away before he breaks into hives*

ErikasNotebook July 14, 2011 - 6:20 pm

Lovely classical rhyme. poor little thing wont be sitting comfortably, will she ?

Catharine July 15, 2011 - 1:36 am

I love the pose!

Livi August 6, 2011 - 4:22 pm

Lol! Very clever!


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