Innocent comments

by Molly Moore

27th July

“I like sucking cock too but then he likes to fuck a pretty mouth….” That was a comment I left on a blog I spent most the weekend reading

Later in the day….

“So you like to suck cock eh?” he asked me as we sat out in the garden

I grinned back at him in reply as I watched him unzip his fly and begin to pull out his already stiffening cock. I didn’t need any other invite and before his cock was even freed from his pants I was on my knees in front of his chair with my greedy little slut mouth open and waiting.

There are times for slow licking, teasing of the head, rolling my tongue round the rim and then there are times when I just want his cock, all of it, buried inside my mouth and this was one of those moments. As soon as his cock was free I had it buried in the back of my throat, my lips closing firmly around the base, letting my tongue flick and dance around him as I savoured that truly wonderful feeling of him growing ever harder within my mouth.

It was the sound of movement from next doors garden that bought my back down to earth, suddenly I remembered where I was, what I was doing the rough gravel of the path was biting into my knees now and a shiver of fear or excitement, I am not sure which, rippled through me. Of course he sensed my unease

“Suck. My. Cock.” He murmured at me as his fingers twisted into my hair and he pushed down firmly on the back of head driving his now fully hard cock deep into my throat and so silencing my impending protest.

Could the neighbours see? I don’t think so. Could the neighbours hear? Maybe the small sound of choking but as his hands guided my mouth up and down his cock I realised I didn’t care all I cared about was this, him, us, the throb inside my cunt, the twitch of his cock in my throat and the thought of his cum filling my mouth and so I buried my face as deep into his crotch as I could and let him take my mouth like the little slut I am.

He fucked me there, bent over the garden chair, my panties round my thighs, my hands gripping the arm of the chair as he rammed his cock in me from behind. My saliva on his cock adding to my already wet and juicy cunt meant that he was able to thrust into me with ease and so with my eyes staring at the garden fence hoping that my neighbours didn’t decide to step outside their back door at this precise moment he empty his balls into me and then left me there, throbbing, wet and used with instructions not to come back into the house until I had made myself cum.

And all this because of one, not so innocent comment, left on someone else’s journal….


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Ps… He took the pictures without me knowing while I completed my task…

Pps…The word this week is ‘journal’. Use the buttons below to find what else people are posting this Wednesday



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Jonathan Vaje July 27, 2011 - 9:50 am

Loved this Molly. Great way to use the “journal” prompt to make it read like a diary entry & be instigated by a comment on a journal too. But it also puts the reader right in the moment of what’s being written about as well.

EroticMoonbeam July 27, 2011 - 4:27 pm

Oh but what a journal it is! and what a great piece of writing this is too!

Jade July 27, 2011 - 4:55 pm

I agree with the above, Molly! The leaving you at the fence, “throbbing, wet and used” is just soooo hot.

G&n July 27, 2011 - 5:36 pm

When did you feel like a public submissive slut?
When you left the naughty comment or when you sucked and fucked yourself outdoors in the garden?

mollyskiss July 27, 2011 - 5:37 pm

Sucking his cock in the garden was probably the moment to be honest….


Nolens Volens July 27, 2011 - 6:24 pm

Damn hot!

Jade July 27, 2011 - 6:45 pm

I’ve added your link to my own WW post, Molly. 🙂

NIHH July 27, 2011 - 8:10 pm

Mmmm-hm sexy post. Got me all hot and bothered x

Curvaceous Dee July 28, 2011 - 12:12 am

That was profoundly hot – I do love outdoor blowjobs (there’s a post there I need to write still) – and the pictures he took of you bringing yourself to orgasm are incredible. You are gorgeous in your debauchery.

xx Dee

Stranded July 28, 2011 - 12:42 am

As always, your imagery is stunning…and the pics help, of course. Bravo, m’lady.

KaziGrrl July 28, 2011 - 4:16 am

Mmmm… ’twas such as innocent comment that started my current relationship with my new Dom… you just never know 😉

Loved your words, damn hot indeed!

Loves2Watch July 29, 2011 - 11:08 am

WOW! I wish my innocent comments would lead to something like that! Thank you for this amazing little erotic snippet.

Hope you and He are well! Miss chatting with you!


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