Comments on: I will always be there

By: John Brownstone

John Brownstone — Wed, 25 Oct 2017 15:47:19 +0000

Creepy and powerful, seeing the inside of his mind like this and viewing those dark thoughts was a haunting look into what is thought to be a normal person. Who knows what secrets lurk behind ones ordinary eyes.

By: Kayla Lords

Kayla Lords — Tue, 24 Oct 2017 23:29:27 +0000

This is EXCELLENT…and creepy. And also, I want to know more about him!

By: Indigo Byrd

Indigo Byrd — Tue, 24 Oct 2017 01:38:33 +0000

This was a truly disturbing read, which worked so well with the image…
Indie

By: Nicci Haydon

Nicci Haydon — Mon, 23 Oct 2017 13:22:48 +0000

Eeesh, that’s damned scary! He is not so normal after all…

By: May More

May More — Mon, 23 Oct 2017 11:28:09 +0000

I really enjoyed that from beginning to end. By writing in the second person you really added a haunting obsessive vibe to the story. Great stuff.

By: Cousin Pons

Cousin Pons — Mon, 23 Oct 2017 07:47:30 +0000

An intricate, dark and sex-riddled story which was a joy to read from beginning to end. x

By: elliott

elliott — Sun, 22 Oct 2017 21:47:07 +0000

Molly… this piece of fiction is above outstanding. Almost a second person vibe. I thought of the famous Farrah Fawcett poster when he tore the one off his wall, but then learned the narrator as I read on. I have to admit, when I first saw Maria’s photo a few weeks ago, I spent some time pulling on my own throbbing cock, so I can see Phillip’s fascination. Good story!

By: Cara Thereon

Cara Thereon — Sun, 22 Oct 2017 21:23:47 +0000

Oo my. Philip has some very dark thoughts he hides deep inside. Not so ordinary